All Comments on 'Mind Control of the Master'

We only read the first and last part. It was so funny that the author should get an academy for the thought and not the writing. We laughed so hard that tears came to our eyes as a hypmomtist fell under the prey of another hypmomtist let alone when he was asleep. You can only be hypmotised if you want to and you cannot be made to do things against your will. Oh, this is just too funny. If this were not the case, then 1/2 of the population would be walking zombies.

Laura & Lisa, bi sisters at CU, NO VOTE for TRASH like this.

This story was very interesting even though I only read the first part,but it kept my interest. Even though it was a little slow for me to get into,but through it all I enjoyed reading it:)

An outsanding and creative story full of plot twists and marked by great writing. It depicts the ultimate in male humiliation and personifies the struggle for dominance among competing males that is the mark of the male gender.

I liked this story. The two `bi sisters` were technically right. Of course no one can be made to do anything against ones will. BUT being mostly, if not all, erotic fantasy in this site, how could this be read and considered as something that could even REMOTELY occur ? Gurls...it`s clear that men who have hidden desires to be treated as submissive, feminine, sexual objects {forced feminization fantasy} isn`t your bag, but hey, what can I say? How could anyone expect two bi females to `get off` on this fantasy anyway? An opinion is just that....an opinion! I give this story a thumbs up for this kind of....well, fantasy !! "Gurls....look into my eyes. You`re getting very very sleepy....so sleepy..........LOL" Hugs, chastity

Ok... I loved the story, hated the ending. I was hoping for a last-minute pull out, a victory for the underdog. Tony should have come out on top (so to speak).

A really kinky read,love seeing a 'good guy' brought down in fiction.

Great work, this is a great introduction to all your other works. I have some reading to do!

this is so good and every tiny penis mans dream.. the chance to have a real cock and all that cum and still think its not their fault the love giving blow jobs. my penis sift is about 11/2 in. and hard 31/2 in. sometimes soft it shrinks all the way inside and just my forskin flops out. I love that feeling of having a pussy, I try to stuff my nuts inside but they wont stay in. If I was stronger I would let my wifes boy friend cut them off. it would only hurt a little time then be so mice. I have castrated pigs and calves and they all survive it. infact they react mostly from being held down. .

long and wonderful, I loved this story, and hope to read more. thanks for sharing.

Can’t wait for the next chapter.

very good story but being the submissive cd i am i wanted him ,more dressed like a sissy slut. i dream of being controlled by a man and being his house wife or maid to serve and obey him in all ways. I have travelled the US for work and been with several men but have not found one that wants to really control me and make me his, most men just want to be sucked off and it is bye bye.

Anyway this is a well written story and keep me on edge through the whole thing, thank you!