All Comments on 'Mind Manipulator'

by beltman70

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
well written

You do need a proof reader. I enjoyed it but it is still rape.

wdelanderwdelanderover 15 years ago
enjoyable and inventive

This may be the best story I've read in the 'mind control' category. Without an elaborate back-story, you created an interesting and believable character, and some exciting sex.

apup76apup76almost 15 years ago
random act of kindness

This is a good story with a good ending. I really like that.

Thanks.

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