All Comments on 'Mind Over Management'

by SEVERUSMAX

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

I love the subordinate dominating his boss angle. That was pulled off really well here, and the scene right after with the manager was good too. I really liked the intro as well; who hasnt wanted their hot boss kissing ass literally?

I just wish the story had a little more build up, introducing the characters before the MC. Still, excellent work!

C_frommnC_frommnover 10 years ago
Great Story

But why no follow-up. He claims he has a start on a Harem and a Harem needs Money to get going and keep going. so you would think he would need some Women with Money. Divorcees,Widows,Buisness, just a few.

SEVERUSMAXSEVERUSMAXover 10 years agoAuthor
Likely to be a follow-up, actually, of some kind. Good ideas.

But it won't be on Lit. I'm not posting anything else to Lit anymore. I'm done writing here. I read, comment, give feedback, etc., but I don't write here anymore.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Where are you posting now.

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