by WillC2020
Checking whether comments are posting. Of course, I thought the story was excellent!
2 wrongs do not make a right. I do not see anything here that your husband had an affair except from the person he crossed swords with
If I was your hubby, I would drown both of you in the pond and call it a day.
DOL
Hear say from a man next to a drunk pissed off woman. If Jack had been a gentleman he would not take advantage of the naked woman. The marriage might still be intact but these characters don't trust each other. The wife will probably be with Jack again and probably the husband will retaliate. The marriage is ultimately doomed.
Two wrong dont make right.but surely. Extent some anger to start healing process 4 star
Not quite believable on a few fronts: 1. You don't swim laps if you're that drunk. 2. Hubby gives no good excuse and just leaves? Not if he's trying to cover up cheating. 3. Nobody is looking for the host for that long? Loved the seduction, that was great but lead in needs some work. Nice effort!
Wonderful! Love the unique plot twist and original variation on a common theme, coupled with exciting sex. Great work, ver hot, 5 stars.
too many things unrealistic to allow it to be a good tale,other than that you may have developed the story to make it more complete....JZK
"That was the whole idea, and when he finds out about it, I'll just call it payback and hope he gets it."
And this is supposed to be a marriage that works well? Why are the two even married?
Hot and sweet, because they both love and are jealous of their wayward spouses. You readers are so judgmental and have very limited knowledge of the range of human behavior.