All Comments on 'Mindy's Muse Ch. 02'

...Of your writing talents, almost reads like a Dashiell Hammett Novel! Love the edgy dialog and backgrounds. Every character is brought out as three dimensional part of the story, especially like how you are developing Dirk... always waiting for your next chapter cliptoe. Cheers! --- Josie

You continue to spin a fascinating tale of violence and passion on so many levels. Great work, again, so much intrigue. It's nice to see a story with such well defined characters, they're so well rounded with depth and dimension. This story builds on the foundation of your earlier work and grows from it to be more complex and engaging. Keep it up, Cliptoe, I'm looking forward to the next chapter...

Another brilliant chapter from you can't wait for the next one

What they said.

keep them coming