by petskunk
The storyline evolved nicely. I think you need one last chapter to wrap it up. Showing the father on board while bringing the message of love to his flock. What about Grandpa? Granny, can probably enhance his sex life too.
Another awesome chapter, hope that the next one won't be the last and that you are up for a couple of more chapters of the family fucking their brains out!
Thanks for the compliments. Chapter 7 should be finished by tomorrow.
As for the pregnancy comment, I don't write about pregnancies. Sorry.
Hope there are more chapters or new similar stories!
Definitely needs another chapter to bring Gramps into the fun
If I did not receive feedback or get to read your comments, it would not be the same. It would be like I was writing in order to dump my work into an endless void. Even reading legitimate feedback that I don't necessarily agree with is good for me to read as well. Thank you all.
I am enjoying these stories...
The chapters are WWWAAAYYYYYY short, with lots of detail, but are also really simplistic in the writing and 💡 concept...all the characters have fallen into the relationship so quickly, and lovingly...
**5**Stars...