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trace_ekiestrace_ekiesalmost 14 years ago
Nice!

Well written. Very realistic.

drscardrscaralmost 14 years ago
Not bad.

Once it got going, it started to smooth out. The back-and-forth POV in the beginning was a little disruptive, but I'm glad I stuck with it. Good first story here.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

I really hope there's a sequel.

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