All Comments on 'Mira the Captive Ch. 01'

cool imagination so far, cant wait to see what happens maybe that race will have a knob the size of a small fist at the end of there cocks.

Just enough world building to capture the readers attention, without slowing the pace of the story. Would have liked just a bit more more detail on the main character's thoughts and feelings. But enough was revealed about her predicament to make me want to know what happens next. Adding the rest of the chapters to my reading list. Thank you for sharing your work.