All Comments on 'Miracle on Slutty 4th Street Ch. 03'

Enjoyed this latest chapter and look forward to more in the future.

I’m hoping some will have the slutty older women

With younger reluctant young men. Thanks for

All your writing efforts!

I love your cheating wife stories like this and Hipster Chicks - I hope you do more like them in the future!

Though this is hot. I prefer the cheating husbands stories. I think thats where you write the best. Hope the next one is a cheating husband

A great reversal of your normal older woman tempts young man stories, which I love. I'd definitely like to see more stories like this and I'm looking forward to more chapters of this story.

The only reason this wasn't a perfect 5 from me was because there wasn't a detailed titfuck scene. Other than that, the rest of it was really hot! Gotta love the classic big-titted blonde girl getting fucked by an older, practiced man. Hope to see the next chapter soon!

This is definitely a lot better than the other chapters, and definitely deserves TheTalkMan name attached to it, but it feels like it is missing something. The setup was excellent as were the descriptions - but the dialogue, as usual, needs some work, especially when the 'deed' is in progress.

As an author myself, I, too, struggle with this same weakness. But it doesn't have to remain one. Truth be told, out of all my years of reading literotica, only two authors have ever been able to accomplish breaking out of this dialogue rut, and those authors would definitely be Klrxo and G.H. Lawrence. Your writing style almost nearly matches G.H. Lawrence's exactly - and, like his work, he tends to have a lot of banter during the 'deed', but he does it in such a way as not to be annoying. Your dialogue in your works, on the other hand, is over-the-top and unnecessary. Which leads us to the Queen of Literotica - klrxo. Her works are amazing, in that her descriptions are not only excellent, but simple. Her descriptions of genitalia duringthe course of her stories is unparalleled. But where her works really shine is the dialogue. You could learn a lot from reading her work, and I highly suggest you do so. She is not called the Queen of Literotica for nothing.

...more of the lengthy filth we've come to expect from the TheTalkMan. I think your longer stories are usually sexier and more powerful. Although the trope of the alpha male who waves his monster cock under the nose of some straight-laced girl, and turns her into a massive cumslut whore, as if by some kind of magic, is a little overused, the ensuing sex is as hot as always.

Time for some red hot incest now, surely?

Usually your stories are about the woman corrupting the man, but this was the opposite.

Thanks you glorious motherfucker, i was waiting eagerly for this one and you surpassed all my expectatives! 5 stars

Great story, more of a fan of he typical female domination stories but these are good in their own way. Just glad to read more talkman.

This was great! I'm more of a fan of the men being seduced by the female, but this was really good.

On your next story, please write something along the line of a married man dressed as santa Claus and a hot slut sits on his lap and asks for a present

you relly NEED to do your own Multi chapter version of: A New Life by Helen1954

PLEEEAAASSSSEEE???

Love your stories when a wife is seduced. This was an amazing read.

I love these. I just hope we get to see young, domineering studs as well as older men. I know old-young is your thing, but stuff like Big tits, tight fit is definitely something I would love to see more of in the future.

After a shaky start to this series this chapter feels like a much needed return to form and I'm interested to see where its going to go next and what you're building towards. Great work TM! Just try not to make us all wait so long next time

Let us read more about this gorgeous couple.

Please!

(And I'd love to learn Bruce's exact age).

Hipster Chicks is one of my favorite stories ever on Literotica and this one has obviously similar parallels...I still feel like I could be convinced in 6-7 pages, but why would I complain about more Lacey or Stephanie Miller?

More stories like GGs like Maggie pls!! Where the guy has started having feelings for the sidechick that he eventually chose! Physical cheating is hot but emotional is even hotter!

This is one of the first times I’ve been able to read more than a few pages of anyone’s work being more than 2-3 pages and be on endless the whole time . I hope you can give us more of Bruce . Great character please give us more stories and back ground on Bruce !!! Thank you

Xoxo

Your humble reader .

...I'd love to hear a more detailed depiction of Bruce's encounter with the blonde twins that featured in one of his videos. A little lesbian incest would certainly add some spice to the tale...

You describe rough sex better than anyone. Would love to hear about Lacey and Bruce getting together again. Hopefully he gives her a baby bump pretty soon.

Love your work, but the older guy/younger girl stories are your best.

Long time fan, most of your stories are about these goddesses who corrupt men. Loved this story because it was a man who was corrupting a woman and turning her into his slut. I would love for you to explore storystyle further and have more chapters/stories similar to this style

Derrick should be really humiliated in the epilogue! It should start out a few weeks after this chapter, Lacey finds out she has gotten pregnant. Derrick is extremely happy to hear this, not knowing that the child is not his! While the months go by and Lacey starts glowing with pregnancy, her boobs are growing even bigger and sexier. However under Bruce’s orders, she never allows her husband to touch them. She lies to him saying that her boobs are just to sore from the pregnancy, but unbeknownst to him, Bruce is over at their house every day while he is at work, tit fucking her and sucking her now gigantic boobs and drinking her sweet breast milk!

Then one day, when she is seven months pregnant, Derrick comes home from work and is in for the shock of his life! He comes home and finds his gorgeous wife naked on their marital bed, but right next to her, also naked and with his giant cock furiously fucking her tits is Bruce!! Derrick is frozen, completely in shock as he witnesses Bruce unload a gigantic amount of cum, more than Derrick could produce in month, all over his gorgeous pregnant wife! After seeing this, Derrick passes out. He wakes up a few minutes later tied to the wardrobe, and he sees Bruce’s cock fucking his wife’s pussy, and sucking and drinking milk from her giant tits! He yells at her asking how the hell could she do this, and Lacey explains that Bruce fucks her far better than he ever could with his pathetic dick, and that they have been lovers for about seven months now! Derrick realizes then that that must mean he is not the father of the baby. Bruce is. He starts sobbing then as Bruce fills up his wife’s pussy with yet another giant load of sperm!

After they are done, Bruce whispers something into Lacey’s ear which she laughs at and looks at her husband and walks over to them. Bruce turns around on the bed and sticks his hairy ass out into the air, as Lacey starts untying her husband. He starts shaking with terror as he realizes what his wife is about to do. He tries to resist but she is far too strong and pushes him over to Bruce and pushes his face right into Bruce’s hairy ass crack! His lips are pressed right into his sweaty asshole and his wife forces him to kiss it! He is kissing the asshole of an old man! The man who impregnated and stolen his gorgeous wife from him! Lacey makes her husband make out with Bruce’s asshole for a long time!

After that, Lacey tells Derrick that their marriage is over! She is kicking him out of the house and Bruce is moving in so they can raise the baby together! The first of many babies! Derrick runs out the house humiliated, with nowhere to go while Bruce and Lacey happily resume fucking each other’s brains out!

A very sexy story but too too long. A 3

This is EXACTLY what I've been looking for the past few months. I love these long stories because it gives more detail, and therefore even more things to read and imagine. It's strangely hard to find stories where the breasts are such a main focus, I don't know why. This work is different in that it gives so much attention to the girl's breasts and I truly appreciate that.

Hope to read more of your work!

When will you write more like this? I come here and reread this often please write more .

Very realistic and descriptive. I enjoyed how the layers of her resistance were peeled away. The next move is for her to be a hotwife and cuckold poor Derrick. She is now turned out and no going back for her.

A little unnecessarily long, but pretty hot. The length could probably be cut by 30-50% with no loss of quality, but if you want to pad it out like you're being paid by the word, that's your choice.

Damn this was hot. This and Hipster Chick, are some of my favorite stories. I hope you write more stories like these in the future.

I liked this story and the length was great, but ‘magic cock’ isn’t a clever way to facilitate Lacey cheating. I thought you would’ve used the conflict between Lacey’s idealism and drive to show Bruce the ‘Christmas Spirit’ and Bruce’s misogynistic beliefs to drive the cheating, much like you did in Hipsters.

Would love a big cock Oder man who would take me hard and long whenever he felt horny