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Click hereWell, I was all for that ... if my body could manage.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous7 months agoIck, this jerk needs to get the chip off his shoulder, his racism and injustice collecting is abhorrent and he has no grasp of reality. Just not a good character to like even if he could redeem himself it’s a mountain to move to get there. He just went on and on about how he couldn’t be treated fairly and everyone else of another race got where they were not by skill or intelligence. He actually didn’t even want to save the girl. That isn’t someone I care to read about.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoGene has some real talent. But when I turned unto page 3 the story changed from a romance with potential to something like Literotica for young teen boys ( or for those with an equivalent maturity level).
Another commented the story was sort of like a doll on which you changed clothes but it was sort of the same as previous stories. Was thinking 5 early on, but at the end it felt more like a 1. So a 3????
bumblegrumalmost 2 years agoIntriguing , story, well told. Thank you for an entertaining experience, well worth all of five stars. More if they were available.
