All Comments on 'Miriam Ch. 02'

She's delicious

This is really enjoyable. Interesting, realistic characters, great sex, nice play of emotions.

Beautiful sense of respect: they respect each other & I guess you respect them as well. Something I try to do (have a look if you like).

Looking forward to more!

Very well written. Good stuff. I like how she wants to have her face held and fucked hard. I am just like that. One difference though...instead of "good girl," I want to hear something like, "Yeah, that's it, suck it you worthless piece of shit!"

Rick has a way with words--"Your pussy is so beautiful." Of course words like that just encourage Miriam to show it off more.

Looking forward to the chapter where Rick and Miriam get it on--a freebie because Miriam has gotten the hots for him.

Great story.

I was recommended this and I don't regret the time spent reading; it's not often the protaganists are both a turn-on and endearing! Do write more.

Don't stop now we need more of MirIan she is pure kink.I would love a neighbor like her.

Really looking forward to the next Miriam and Rick chapter!

another chapter please, this one was so good, it has to be leading up to something. Will she do it again?

any chance to read further adventures of Miriam and Mr. Benson?

Charming quite non conventional relationship.

Chapter 3?

I love the connection between Rick and Miriam, and the way you so authentically portray the generational difference between them, but also the tenderness. I do hope you'll be inspired to continue this in the future!