All Comments on 'Misbehaving'

Superb

I don't normally read stories this long here, but this is a beauty. Right from the start, an intelligent, elegantly crafted sketch with movement and luscious descriptions. Vivid, immediate, not just three dimensional but another one added on. Thanks and well done.

Simply brilliant. Very powerful. Beautifully crafted. Well done.

Beautiful!

Wow. What a gem. And only two stories... It's alright, I can wait. Kiwi writers are some of the best I've encountered on this site I must say.

This was amazing.

Normally I lose interest in such a long build up, but this was beautifully written and such a such burn.

Please tell me that this was just the beginning and that there is much more to cum

wow, its's the most i can say.

WOW

This is why I loved this Author so very much: "In the same way as I don't look like anyone's immediate idea of gay, I also don't look like the poster boy for clever. You can put me in a lab coat, nitrile gloves and safety glasses, even give me a test tube to hold and stand me under a fume hood, but I still look like I ought to be out concreting a driveway somewhere"

Brilliant.

Damn this was good, great, wow.

OMG !! That was awesome. Thank you. You're a great writer..

Simply wonderful! Hot buildup, great descriptions & lusty sex! Bravo!

Loved it!! Thanks for the slow burn with great characters

More tremendous writing. Don't normally comment but that is two for two on reading your well crafted stories. Thanks again

I don’t usually like stories with very little sex. I use this site to get off. But your stories are so well written that I’ve now read two in their entirety. It’s almost too bad that these stories are too sexy for regular short story sites. Anyway, thanks-I like your work

Loved it. Absolutely magical.