All Comments on 'Miss Allison Ch. 02'

Nicely done.

David has a lot to learn, should be entertaining!

Brilliant story. It is unbelievably good, and the dialogue and thoughts going through David’s head are so real. The writing is smooth and flowing. I don’t know how to say it, but this story is simply a pleasure to read. The plot gets more interesting as it goes on. First Miss Allison, and now his boss, Meghan. How was that connection between the two women made? I am looking forward to the next chapter.

GREAT FOLLOW UP PART! A very interesting twist with the boss :)

I love the series. I’m a lot more timid than this guy, more guarded. I’d promptly press sexual harassment charges if my boss pulled this, though. I wouldn’t care if my boss looked like Taylor Swift. It’s not a pleasant work environment.

Most of my stories strain on suspension of disbelief too. I eagerly await part three and finding out how the women both know each other.

Are You searching to collar and own ?

Good premise continues.

But initial D/s scene didn't do it for me. No teasing. No real touching. No getting him all hot and bothered before the ice bath and cage.

Scene in his office seems to be a good setup for what's to come, but not more.

Four stars.

The wsy Miss Allison so easily takes control of him is a delight. I'd like to think I wouldn't have masturbated when commanded not to, but I'm pretty weak. The chastity cage was the perfect punishment. The camera is a stupid idea, i'm sure we'll find out later. Great twist getting the boss involved.

Wonder what I’d score with this survey!

Still a good premise.

Still too much just in preparation for what will follow,

Four stars.