by pacifist91w
You have an excellent story and a clear opportunity for a great multi-part story! Thanks.
Very nice , especially enjoyed how the repair person was straight . a nice little twist . But what does Miss Fix it look like ? Nicely done
More than wanting a continuation, I'd like more of businesswoman's seductions!
That's what I am. You delivered an excellent story, with good craftsmanship and very interesting people. I would like to read its sequel.
A well-crafted and well-written story. Great job building up the characters and setting the scene - very believable. If you follow-up with a sequel, it would be interesting to have the business exec push her dominace further. Nice work.
I enjoyed her confusion and arousal. The way she was trying to make sense of her reactions while seamlessly following those very reactions. Mmmm.
I will confess that you threw me for a bit with RepairWoman having both coveralls and tight denim pants... but then I decided that I didn't really need to understand more than that she was being stripped, and found herself more thrilled than alarmed. Once over that little bump, mmmm.