All Comments on 'Missed Connection'

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Anonymous9 months ago

I’m really loving the way this story is opening. It’s exciting to see the number of chapters there are to look forward to.

Anonymousalmost 4 years ago

Seeing this made me curious how the Craigs list missed connections in my area

Lo and behold I found this:

So I seen u at Kroger's u were honestly the most perfect person I ever seen we made eye contact. U were the finest man I have ever seen. I was in a red dress. U intimidated me because of ur beauty and our eye contact was so strong. I fled to the self checkout. I'm sure u probably will never see this but I just want to say thank you for blessing me with ur presence even if it was for a minute.

I think it’s funny how similar the scenario was.

ladiebrowneyez over 10 years ago

wooAHHH

AND IM JUST NOW COMING ACROSS THIS STORY wooow great start

Anonymousabout 11 years ago

wow

Wow what an amazing start

Anonymousover 11 years ago

Im hooked

I love this beginning...can wait for more

Alpha_Marm almost 12 years ago

nice beginning

Lovely!!!!

Metamorphose almost 12 years ago

Good start

The writing is good, the conflict is there. Tension is building nice and slow.

Too much focus on physical characteristics. Those descriptions slow down the story.

CoCoNiy101 almost 12 years ago

Ahhhh, Omg Lol.

If you could see my face you'd think I was a 13 year old girl who just got her first kiss! What a clever clever clever plot. Wow I really enjoyed this and I love Kassidy's character! Sean is such an asshole. Friend or no frend. But hopefully Jackson can make her see she should have a lot more respect for her body. And the fact that hes so much older is so HOT. Ahaha, maybe it's just me. *shrug* Anyway, keep up the good work and keep the posts coming as fast as you have been lol. People will begin to expect them at this frequency ;)