All Comments on 'Missing Ch. 31-40'

Damn good story and left it with another cliff hangar, anxiously awaiting the next chapters

Very good combining the stories, keep up the good work

Another great chapter. Still hoping Bonnie finds her second chance mate. There are a couple of possibilities.

I'm loving the tie-in with Porch Wolf. BUT if you keep this up, I'll have to go back and re-read it. Woe is me, lol.

Love the story tie-in. Although hated you would end at that point. Great as always

Loving this story. I hate that I will have to wait several weeks for the next installment!

Made me do it. I went back and re-read Porch Wolf.

Dear author,

This is an excellent story. By this I mean I donwloaded

the complete "Missing" chapters and read them in my

text editor.

It took me three days to get through the complete story

and I liked it immensely. I really hated being left in the air

with that cliffhanger at the end of chapter forty. I hope

you will soon continue the story.

I'm now going to pick up your other stories and read them

the same way I did "Missing."

Thank you very much for a great story.

Bye for now.

I really like part wolf's body of work but i'm struggling with this one. For me: It seems to run into credibility problems when the story gets to Maine. Maine is hard to write. Stephen King can do it, but few other authors can. The devil is in the details. Get the little details right ... and you can spin the biggest yarn.

If i could offer bit more critique ? Try to keep the number of different characters down to a handful or so. It's easier for the reader to keep track of the story line. Break up repeating patterns. We all know sharkbait has an appetite and Bonnie is a specialist in a niche martial art. She's getting a bit long in the tooth and her body is to broken for all that Rambo stuff now. She lives for vengeance. That's a very dark place. She's a few heartbeats from retirement. Also ... she's rapidly approaching menopause. It's a major life change. Something along the lines of the triple goddess and the crone aspect might be appropriate in this genre ?

Ahh well ... i've rambled on long enough. It just feels as though the story line might benefit from some fresh inspiration. That could be most anything different that the author could use as a muse.

Nice tie in to porch wolf!