All Comments on 'Missing Pieces'

Cute and hot. Sappy and sexy. I think this story hit all my buttons.

Honestly, we need more consensual MC on here.

This is absolute rubbish and it just goes on and on and on.

Rare to see Mind control stories with consent, or between willing partners, but its always nice when I do. Love the story!

That was a sweet emotional story. It had many realistic parts of a young wanna-be couples life. I found it completely enjoyable and don’t find enough of these type of stories scattered around the usual hypnotic stuff.

Well done! Great story of young love crossed with mind control. Remarkable, and I agree with those who said they were glad consent was an important element of what made it so good. I was a little surprised when you switched points of view, but it worked. The sex was also very hot, and after all this is Literotica.

The characters were adorable. They practically radiated young love. I love how much they actually cared for each other. Most of all though, I appreciate the fact that consent was such an important part of the story. Usually, mind control/hypnosis is centered around noncon and to find one like this is a real treat. Thanks for that