All Comments on 'Mission Creep'

This was awesome!

A fun read. Aptly titled.

This was so much fun to read.

Wow, that escalated quickly !

Once again something quite original only you could come up with, very funny to push the idea that far.

A bit of taking a single paradigm past excess, through ridiculous, and all the way to sublime, but an enjoyable read. I just hope that some AI doesn't use it as a roadmap instead of a caution.

Hilarious, well done! Very entertaining to see the law of unintended consequences go off this way.

a classic SomeoneBlue story.

I'm reminded ever so slightly of Jack Williamson's "With Folded Hands".

This was definitely a wild ride. It's always interesting when the slave is way more ambitious than the master and everything just starts snowballing into insanity. Kind of a shame we didn't get to see more of the dude's perspective, but it makes the interaction at the end much more impactful.

Here's hoping the dinosaurs don't want to f*ck him too, though...

That was really cute! A refreshing humorous tale…

Wtf just a loser with no domination of his own and his harem. Every lovely dudes wet dream I suppose - women don’t work like this

If there were a higher rating than 'Loved it' you'd have it. Great story!

Loved this!

A lovely story. Very entertaining. Obviously a cautionary tale about the importance of careful initial slave selection, right?

Very clever! Maybe you want to slightly tweak the beginning since it’s not clear how he met her and she ended up in his apartment. Perhaps he’s a waiter at her favorite cafe where she likes to work late?

Lmao This is hilarious. A true illustration of "The devil is in the details"

Do not mind control people smarter than you without a pre written 300 page contract covering all contingencies XD

"Wait... no, no, I guess it worked. I do have a strange feeling of overwhelming loyalty to you." - When I read this, I thought she might be faking. - Let's say the device did not work due to some faulty electronic component. Just out of curiosity she plays along and later gets the device repaired. This would much better fit the fact that she does what she likes to do, never really asks what master desires and use him only as a puppet.

A very entertaining story. How she got there before getting hypnotized doesn't really matter. There's enough stories about the initial steps of getting some mystical object from a weird uncle.

I like the twist in this.

Reminds me a lot of the movie 'Ruthless People', in which Bette Midler assumes control of her own abduction and ransom at the hands of two bumbling novice kidnappers.

"I'm...marked down? I've been kidnapped by K-Mart!"

'...Master made a soft, whimpering sound as the other members of his harem started to dance. Kyle walked off, mind already buzzing with new ideas...'

Continuity break. It's Karyn who is walking off. Kyle [Kylie, actually] is still performing after just then meeting Master.

You seem to lose focus in some of your stories, here and there, mixing up one character with another.

This was so brilliant. Well done!