All Comments on 'Missy and Her Friend'

Really enjoyed it. The majority of the dialogue was simply stated, clear communication. To respond to the "3rd grader" comment, this is how non-monogamy works: Clear, concise communication.

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"Do you want to fuck her?"

I knew this was one of those questions that whatever answer you gave it would upset one of them.

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If an honest response to a question causes people to be upset, that's an issue. Glad this ended well; even if this moment made me roll my eyes a bit.

While the situation and characters were mostly fun, the writing came off as objectifying and many of the descriptions as shallow. There's very little focus on how the characters feel about the situation and the focus is all on describing visuals and actions. The focus on the penis size was also cringe; size fetishisation is so commonplace and always comes out of nowhere, it's a very tired trope. Would have benefited from better character development and description of their feelings about it all.

Fantastic,more please