All Comments on 'Mistaken Beauty'

Good start but went downhill

I enjoyed this, though I wish it had gone on for longer, it feels wanting for another half. I imagine the name of Endrosa was meant to sound similar to androgynous (I also like how her hair blending into her clothes and the darkness seems to connect to the idea of androgeny) Although I wonder if Fallosa was meant to sound like fallacy in reference to her facade, or if it was meant to sound like phallus, possibly hinting at her possibly having a penis.