All Comments on 'Mistaken by Daddy Ch. 01'

love it wish it was me

Love the setup. The writing is solid and although there isn't much to see yet I think a lot of the little details are great (David's reactions, Daddy manhandling David with ease, etc). Great start to the story, looking forward to see where it goes!

thank you for these comments! it's always appreciated. the next part should be going up soon.

I'm very much looking forward to more of this story!

really hot set up. Hope to see David continue to struggle and try all he can to avoid being buggered. Failed at the end of course, big time. lol

What a terrific first story! You write so well, I'm looking forward to reading more.

much appreciated, thank you for taking the time to say so! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story, its final part will be up soon. :)

Oh my goodness. I am fanning myself reading how high-powered David gets convinced that what he needs is a spanking from a Daddy that doesn't even get his name right. Instant fan of your writing!