All Comments on 'Mistaken for a Girl'

Sometimes circumstances bring out true feelings and emotions. an interesting and believable story

You kind of hit us over the head with the fact that

A- he was impersonating his sister

B- he was being taken by a man

C- he was being fucked.

We got the point, no reason to repeat those facats every two sentences.

Also, it was a little confusing: first our hero says he is planning on using his sisters dildo, then he is shocked and horrified that he is being penetrated. And, since he was a very willing, if not very eager, participant, it is difficult to justify the "rape" angle.

I look forward though, to your future efforts

I think the other reviewer missed that the repetition sort of gave it a feverish quality, and worked well, the desire mixed with fear mixed with uncertainty. One can see very well into the confused, impassioned mind of the narrator.

I agree-- the repetition gives it a feverish quality, the fear mixed with undeniable arousal, and the writer repeatedly stating exactly what it is that's happening, and the description of Jared, is very, very hot. GREAT!

Wow soooo jealous. Always been fucked as a bottom male - would be great to be fucked by a straight guy thinking I was a woman. Lucky you.

Loved your story, but you could have had him use the enema equipment he had found earlier to clean himself out and then had his sister come in to find him douching anally and having to explain it to her.

Wow have to say I did really enjoy that story.

Will he be used again?

Loads more chapters please :-)

i thought this was a very hot story and would love to see where you can take it next.

Would like to see a sequel.

Would have been a great story if not for constantly calling it rape. Legally the boyfriend was actually raped, not the brother.

The twist at the end would have been, the boyfriend kisses him on the cheek and thanks him by saying his name