All Comments on 'Mister Lucky Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

gets confused towaeds the end, who is 'Miriam', suspect it was 'Marcia' ... but interesting in a loser deadbeat lowlife way

xMASTERMINDXxMASTERMINDXalmost 9 years agoAuthor
BUD IS A CRIMINAL

Bud is a feral human who takes his money and sex and meals however they come. He robs because he can, same as you or I'd pick up a Quarter off the sidewalk. Its not personal itz biznezz. He didn't try and rescue the Laundromat people from the illegals, they didn't fuck with him.

cartmanrlscartmanrlsalmost 9 years ago
good start

im liking the story so far my only gripe is why would a guy with his luck ever need to rob someone.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
A good start.

As long as it doesn't become a dead end series...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
life is abitch then you go to the big house

good story not erotic enough tenbears 43

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