All Comments on 'Mistress Chronicles Ch. 05'

The realness factor well overpowers the, at times, redundancy in my humble opinion. A very well written and genuine account. Original beyond compare. Thanks for sharing your wonderful writing!

Exciting to read about his transformation revealed in his journal, and all the while I'm imagining how your mind is working... exercising levers of control. Looking forward to reading about your first encounter with him/Nancy.

I'm glad to see a new chapter of it - thank you for posting. Five stars.