All Comments on 'Mistress Helene and Mandy'

Mistress SWP,

Another fantastic story. You truly do have a talent for writing lesbian erotica. Your characters are superb - they leap (or crawl) off the screen!

It is a privilege to be able to read Your work. i am most grateful. Thank You Mistress SWP.

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I don’t normally enjoy this type of story. Which shows how good it is. Thank you.

What a wonderful story! I so enjoy such well written stories where the characters are so well described. And the golden shower scene was fantastic, one of favorite things to do with a slave.

That you got such nice comments, every writer needs more of those and less entitled ones. Maybe I'm ignorant but the communication between the different persons seems way too brazen and silly it really stopped me from engaging in the story.

I hope you improve in describing the interpersonal interactions. Anyhow good story way better than I ever could achieve.

Your description of the most intimate work with the loving tongue was superb!

Very classy and well-written.

I wanted to know more about Grace, but this makes me want to know even more about Mandy.

Also, what NYC suburb, I wonder.