All Comments on 'Mistress K's Experiment'

very well written, could use a bit more teasing and hardcore sex near the end. some of the sentences in the early part of the story seem a bit jumbled though, u might wanna work on breaking them into shorter, easier to understand lines. good job though! i hope there will be more to this one.

bunny thank you for the comment, and yes I have a couple of ideas floating around to continue the characters into another short.Will spend some time trying to not make the next one's begining difficult to follow.