All Comments on 'Mistress Takes a New Slave'

Very original premise. Lots of room to continue. Hope you do!

When she let him loose, he went right to the Police, then hired a lawyer. She went to jail, lost her credentials and the school paid him so much money that he retired before even finishing school. You gave absolutely no thought to any consequences. Another man might get loose and she'd be lucky to make it to the hospital or the morgue. Dumb even for fiction.

Don't listen to that other anon, this is a pretty good premise and your writing is a lot better than most I've seen on this site. Obviously any noncon scenario you would see on here would end with the person actually going to the police, but a healthy dose of suspension of disbelief is in order when reading things like this. I really do hope you continue this and don't consider it a finished piece though.

Please ignore the "anon" troll comment about "drivel". Always the same trashing of someone else's efforts.

Can't wait to see the next chapters