All Comments on 'Mistress to Slave, A Lost Bet'

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fitntrimfitntrimabout 4 years ago
incredibly awesome

So hot I couldn’t stop reading, and the character arc is wonderful

Cindy1001Cindy1001over 3 years ago
Roundabout

What a roundabout of emotions, that leaves the reader (alas, this reader) in utter confusion. Penitention, salvation, retribution, cleansing of the soul, rebirth. I will stop, I don't get it anyway.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Great story but finished a little quick. Would have loved a little twist in the end to leave a sequel as a possiblity. I love these types of stories

mul717ud35mul717ud35about 3 years ago

Please write more stories like this!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

That was an enticing roller coaster ride on thrills, suspense and surprises. Despite some extremes it was so well told that I hope more stories are to come from this author.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I love stories where dommes become subs. This was written beautifully, thank you!

AviciaAviciaover 1 year ago

Great story but I would have enjoyed it more if she had remained free to help her ex slaves get settled in life - to find some good rather than throw it away

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