All Comments on 'Mixed Double'

Enjoyed the story and not being sure where the plot was going. Now going to read more of your work.

Wow! Exceedingly well done. Congratulations

This actually happened to me, well no it didn't!

I was basically Ian and the girl was French. The college incidentally, was The London College of Printing. We both hit it off and were modelling for two days, I have shortened it into one day. We were approached after a rather full on second day by a couple of photography students, both female, who rather nervously asked if we would do some erotic stuff for them that evening. We both said yes, but then I remembered I was booked for another class that evening. I couldn't bail out as it was the one run by my girlfriend!

Mon grand regret!

Thoroughly enjoyed it from start to finish although you have Joanne throwing her kimono gown onto Ian's shirt on the ground while he is still wearing it. Nice change to find good grammar & spelling all the way through when so many haven't.

Best of all it is all totally believable & keeps you interested from start to finish.

Keith

Wow !

Incredibly erotic, perfect ending.

Shame there's no part 2.......

Rapier

One of my favorite yet!

very erotic

Wow!

Loved this. My favourite subject!