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impo_58impo_58over 9 years ago
Not a bad story...but...

Not a bad story...but...1st - were they married? If so why did they need to wait for the parents were out of the house? If they weren't married this isn't a LW story...

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
married or not...

Excellent start, but I needed a bit more from these two before the boys showed up. Oh well, let's get it on. Loving wives or partners I don't care about their civil status.

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