All Comments on 'Mixed Family'

Just not how a mom thinks or talks about her kids, even a horny one. Hope the nerd gets revenge for him and his family, but that's not how these stories go. Pretty predictable.

Good start please continue 👌

Horrible start. I quit reading while you were still working on your moronic list of characters. Nobody that puts that shit at the beginning of a submission doesn't deserve the time to read the garbage that is sure to follow.

Religion is not always words. Sometimes, within a single paragraph, you have repeated the same thought!

More than sometimes because this happens in numerous paragraphs. It requireseems a sentence to convey a thought.

Now that I have created a demonstration of your style of repit ion perhaps you could Proof Read this story to see how frequently you fell into the trap.

Horrible story. I don't know if you have encountered any women who will not jump on some random dick she sees.