All Comments on 'Miz Sara Faces a Tough Opponent'

The stories are hoary but ahhh the characters,dialogue and it's a treat to be privvy to Miz. Sarah's incisive, ever so ladylike and yet slyly subversive internal dialogue. Is Cindy going to have herself the ex-controller as a beau?? Only Heaven and Mr. Macumber knows for sure. You'll just have to wait for next installmen!. I know I will.

OOPS I mean Miz Sara. F.M. DOES IT AGAIN WITH THE MIZ SARA SERIES OF FAMILY LAW. GOOD WORK F.M. TK U MLJ LV NV

Keep em coming please.

Man, woman, slut,or tramp is beats every one of them down.

Keep them coming! This is great stuff.

Special?Better! Extraordinary? Better! Wonderful? Better!

Finding a fresh F. Macomber's story make Literotica's "New" category fun to search. As solid a 5 as possible!!!!!

I love these stories. More please.

A little mystery would have made it more interesting. And, of course, a little real erotica would have been nice, given that the site is Literotica.

What happens with the Mallinsons? And does Miz Sara defend the Missus Mallinson against Rosa's depredations while giving the villanous shyster her comeuppance?

Your dialogue is priceless. I did notice a couple of four-letter words this time, although (appropriately) Miz Sarah is not their utterer. Thank you and thank Miz Agnes Scott and the faculty that gathered at her fine institution to teach you to write so entertainingly.

Great entertainment. Thank you.

Please please please keep Miz Sarah stories coming. You have a perfect setup with the Mallinsons for a followup.

Having grown up in No' Carolina I adore the dialogue!

Better than grits and sweet tea!

I always imagine Miz Sara as the woman from Murder, She Wrote.

Entertaining and lighthearted.

Is it possible to be smart and southern at the same time? Sarah reminds me of my aunts. I guess thats no surprise, I live about an hour and a half up the interstate. :)

Miz Sara is a wonderful breath of fresh southern air! Please keep her in business.

Miz Sara is Like a Lot of Southern Ladies I Grew Up With.

Marshmellow on the outside, steel on the inside.

GOOD TALE!

if you keep up these excellent short story masterpieces you may replace JPB as the king of the short erotic story!

Excellent extention of character development that you've already established!

Your stories are so refreshing. Thanks for a great read!!

I just love this Miz Sara series. I am sure that you will get a lot of crap from the language police and anons but who cares. I just enjoy the read. As a male you do a female character so well. Just want to sit and have a sherry with your Miz Sara. Thanks a lot. Jim

Miz Sara reminds me of a female Perry Mason and her helpers are Della Street. Still love it.

I am enjoying your Miz Sara Series. It's a lot of fun.

I have to admit, when I first saw the Miz Sara stories appearing last month (I think), from the name they sounded to me like they would be some sort of dom stories. I hate sub and dom stories. So I gave them a pass without investigating further. My loss.

This one was entertaining and in large part because of Miz Sara herself. Well written besides. I'm going to go back and catch up with the others

loving this Miz Sara stories. and i think Janine and her bf's biggest problem is not about prostitution. its the IRS.

This one is still unfinished, me thinks???

I too think it is unfinished, luv Miz Sara.

This was a fun read. I read all of the Miz Sara stories and enjoyed every one. Thank you for writing and I look forward to more submissions.

Really a lot of fun, but I never expected this from an Agnes Scott graduate! It sounds like she is going to need a new assistant.

love your stories,you are new and very good,hope to see more stories from you. and thanks for writing

Excellent series and I see you just released another one today. I can't wait to read it but I thought I should read the others first. My congratulations for the development of such great characters and excellent stories. Please continue. Thank you

A very enjoyable read, as usual. Loved the way she got her own back on the Italian, lol

One of the worst. The "writer" should take another hobby,like modeling women's underwear !

Another winner as usual

I liked this one too - it is fun seeing her work the little subplots out -

The Little old southern belle routine is priceless

WHY NOT??????? You don't touch ladies .... but beating the shit out of a cheating whore wife is ENTIRELY APPROPRIATE Jeanine is s a now just another cum dump who betrayed her husband ... and definitely not a devoted wife deserving of his protection! Bad ending to an otherwise good story because you "pussed out" on retribution for the slut wife.

What happened to the other couple? I assume the other divorce was simply a tool to set up the main storyline.

Again, amazing writing. I continue to be a big fan!

Hey Anonymous, stop and think for a minute... IF he had started beating on his future ex wife especially in front of a lawyer he would have probably ended up in jail himself for assault... That would have given her lawyer more "amunition" to use against him...

IANAL but I thought bypassing the lawyer to deliver the proposals directly to the wife was an ethics violation.

But I love the characters enough to overlook that.

A very good story. I really enjoyed it. I don't understand some of the comments, there is such a thing as "literary license" in stories. Sometimes I think people are to critical of these stories. Some of the comments, I can see as trying to help the author. I know that I have said this before in previous comments, but what an imagination you have. I also enjoy when the cheaters are punished. Good Job!

Minor nit-pick – She was about to call Betty when David called, and she had him come in the next morning, then called Betty back the day after THAT. Why didn’t she call Betty back right after David’s call?

Wouldn’t lingerie parties be more usually held at night?

Another five star installment. Love it.

Looking forward to reading more about Miz Sara!

know more than their counterpoints about fairness and fair play, TK U MLJ LV NV

Why are the men in these stories so dumb.

Laughed and enjoyed

Good one! I enjoyed that. What happened in the other divorce case. Is there a part two?

I obviously posted that older comment too quickly!

The Miz Sara stories are getting stupider. Author wants us to appreciate that a wife is running a brothel in her own home when her husband is only a short drive away. Too stupid to be considered fantasy.

What a charmingly told story.

Good story, we’ll told. 4 stars.

I doubt someone other is still here to read this, but I ran a pretty good gaming club and youth lounge out of my mother's house while she was at work and the cop across the street was asleep. Timing is everything, and I was OCD about the neighborhood comings and goings, you just work in the margins.

The brothel in the house seems unlikely to avoid discovery with the husband working in town. Especially since the soon-to-be-ex-wife kept strident demanding he stay away from the house during the day. It is suggested though not directly written that this has been going on for many months and his layoff caused a crisis for the brothel operating. Prettybsure it would have been spotted well beforehand and any husband worth his salt would have hired a private eye long beforehand. Maybe not a prostitution conviction but certainly enough to file based on adultery.

Another good one.

Come uppance. Especially in the house of a 'rising son'.

Whatever the naysayers... great story and great comeuppance! Thank you!

5 stars from Xluckylee