All Comments on 'Mizrah's Ladder Ch. 02'

The sex scenes are mind-blowing!

You're undoubtedly one of the most talented smut writers I've come across. You craft intricate imagery and vibrant depictions of the human body.

This chapter is incredibly intense, especially considering she doesn't know his name. It tells me that she's embracing her desires and leaving an unsatisfying life behind to follow this enigmatic and otherworldly man. But she soon finds out that it wasn't just a coincidence. He knew her. He went after her for a reason. I like when there are inner motives, or even hidden. The chapter's title, "the fever after being bitten," aligns well with its theme.

You have a way of mixing the horror and sexual arousal that just works like a charm. It makes sense, her senses are heightened, everything just feels incredibly intense and otherworldly.