All Comments on 'Mizrah's Ladder Ch. 03'

The opening lines of each of your chapters are always exquisite. The atmosphere is so perfectly developed, truly a horror story as it should be.

The way you transformed what initially appeared to be a mindless sexual adventure into something more meaningful was masterfully executed. So, there's something else, something Mizrah knows, and a clear intent beyond pleasure. It's soooo perfect the way she descends from a corporate soul-sucking job into a monstrous life filled with excitement and danger.

The entire fighting scene is quite impressive! Writing about such scenes can be a challenge, as it's not easy to convey body movements fluidly, fighting feels almost like a violent dance. Yet, you always manage to do it properly!

The ending is ABSOLUTELY PERFECT!! I am so speechless. It's... just... an incredible first Hunt. The overwhelming sensation of turning into a monster and the powerful influence of the moon washing over her. You are an incredible writer.