All Comments on 'Mizrah's Ladder Ch. 04'

WOW. That was wild. I love the fact that they have sex over and over and also seem to be really into each other. Great descriptions!

I really like how this was written in rounds. The blend of sensuality and the taste of blood after their first hunt was a nice touch. You made this an intensified experience that was portrayed perfectly. You have skillfully engaged all five senses - I particularly love how scent plays a significant role in the whole encounter.

Their bond seems to have been born out of loneliness, but they are so quickly falling into each other.

And now, it is his turn to attend to her! “He knows how to turn every part of you into an erogenous zone, and then your erogenous zones he drives wild.” The seventh round is my favourite; what great pacing and vivid, lewd descriptions.

I could honestly quote “round seven” entirely, it is probably the best smut I have ever read.