All Comments on 'Moaning Husband's Death'

Well written I think.. Keep it up... Rather you keep it wet.. I'll keep it up.. Cheers.. 🌹

She's 32 and has had 4 previous husband's??? No way Jose. Golddigger comes to mind. I pretty much gave up at the 11 inch part. You're in serious need of an Editor. Evan lied next to me??? Lay next to me maybe?????

1 star is too many

DragonRider55

I gave your story three stars for the story content, but it seems pretty obvious that English is not your native language. There were so many typos, I almost stopped reading after only a couple of paragraphs. I noticed that you have another story submitted, so I'll give it a try. Hopefully it will be much better than this one.

The Kennedy;s 🤣😂🤣