by silkstockingslover
Great tale (and tail!), Jasmine! Five stars! Will Phil get to do more filling? Will he get to fill his daughters? Will this be a new version of Family Affair? Oh, the possibilities! Luke and Phil share a thrill? The guys are both pegged? Mmm! I definitely want more of this family!
The story idea? Not bad at all. The technical writing? Pretty damn good. Particularly compared to some of the other writings here. The dialogue? Straight out of a comic book. Or a Beavis and Butthead episode. "Eat my pussy, nasty daughter pet". Heh heh. She said 'pet'. Heh heh.
So sucking, fucklng depraved and debauched. Omg you have done it again Jasmine you cunt crazed sex addict, absolutely love it. Cunt lapping sex maniac Lancβs UK.
As you may already know MTL is an accomplished author in his own right: I would also suggest you check out his collaborative submission as MTLL (two submissions), as well the four submissions as MTL called "Practice".
2 great stories, waiting for more. These stories would make awesome illustrated stories.
Hahahaha always the best time stroking one out to your stories SSL. Cant wait for more.
Even better than part 1. A couple of tiny punctuation errors which don't detract from a well thought out and written story.
Looking forward I hope you continue this series. I'm sure you could write another couple of chapters based on the events in the epilogue and surely there'll be some based on the Paris trip and Claire's college roommate. There could be a short series when Alex goes to college but she might be too submissive unless Claire helps her become stronger and more dominant as she deserves a loving relationship.
5 stars
of modern family incest. could you write some where phil and claire's dad also get some and get in on the action? maybe daughter's blow their father's? alex and haley blow phil and claire blows her dad? idk. Love the anal and maybe with some foot fetish involved?? just a thought...
Hot, if thereβs gonna be another sequel you should add Phil and Luke fucking the 3 women in a big family orgy.
Too much work keeping up the storyline that really added little to the action!
352. These stories featured ass fucking with plastic cocks plus some amorous attention between sisters shown mostly in the first part. I was hoping for more, perhaps with Gloria or the two males. I just donβt get excited about plastic cocks for the user - how do they get off? The two males had real cocks - use them!