All Comments on 'Modern Harem Ch. 01'

Well now I have to see where this story goes and how he gets away with developing a harem! Will he be able to save these girls and will the matron who tried to stiff him ask for something from him as she started to explain her reason?

Yep , this is starting off slow. But the idea is interesting and the characters have potential. Elizabeth seems a bit too ready to make the jump but given the facts so far, expecting logical behavior is probably not right. But she isn't coming across as desperate for an anchor.

I confess that the idea of some previously unknown religion managing to become such a world power that it crushes countries is requiring a bit more suspension of disbelief than I am usually capable of but I am willing to give it more time. Maybe we will find out more that would explain this bizarre turn of events.

Nice character development. You've also done a good job hinting at the world in which they live. In my opinion, you don't need too much exposition on that, only as much as you're happy with, suffice to say that this is the new status quo.

Looking forward to Elizabeth's life and the future of the harem.

Your story sounds very promising I look forward to its continuation.

Thank you for the comments and the criticism, I really appreciate it!

Just found your story today, and must say it is a very good start. I look forward to seeing how you develop it!

I thought you have a great story line going. I wanted to keep reading, so I hope ch. 2 comes soon.

I look forward to reading more about Elizabeth and Mr. Hart.

I see definite potential here.