by deathlynx
And to the commenter who said "...not so formal vocabulary.": Athena is the goddess of wisdom/intelligence, dumbass.
A truly well written piece! Proper speech and grammar should be praised, not scorned. Unlike that other commenter, I enjoyed the facts about Athena and feel that they expound on Athena's motives really well. I hope to read more of your work in the future.
Don't listen to the other commentator, I loved all the details! Such a hot story.
u needed to cut down on all of the fucking facts. and just use slang, not so formal vocabulary. dont explain bout athena, just lead to the activity.