by PupBayou
Ok, so I've been reading on this site for a few months now, and I stumbled across this little gem. I've fallen in love and even made an account just so I could support it. Everything from the characters I've felt I've known my entire life, to the surprisingly descriptive scenes, to the raw emotion you manage to get across. The Axel and Clay backstory even made me tear up, something I don't exactly look for when it comes to erotic fiction, but it works in this case. I'm not into heavy bdsm, and never thought twice about puppy play, but you've managed to change my entire perspective on it, hell, even want to try it myself now. Some of the scenes get a little frantic at times but overall I think you've done a fantastic job. It isn't easy to balance plot, heavy kink, and the love between the two, but this seems like a good mix man. Looking forward to seeing where these two, (or three if you go that route,) end up by the time it's over. Cheers to many more chapters. Just know, you've got a fan in this old man.
So I just found this story and first red 18. chapter because im a switch so i was interested in reading cute little sub switching roles and controling his dom. I imidietly red the whole "book" from the begining in just one day. you made me cry out of laughter in some parts (wen Daddy Ducan said that nun would faint if any knew what he wanted to do to a boy) and then in outher out of sadnes and that awe feeling (like when Clay reshured Ducan that he's staying no matter how painfull things might be). It isnt just sex sex sex and flat stereotipical characters, you have background storiyes, plots and the way you whrite is absolutley amazing (i just get lost reading this and i can realy put myself in characters shoes). please don't whrite 20 chapters but 30 as you said you might, I cant get enough of this, and judging by other coments and marks everyone else love it too. You're amazing writter and I hope you'll continue posting your work here. <3
p.s. Sorry for the lenght and my bad spellng
Wow wow wow!!!!! I have absolutely loved this story please add more I’m so in love with the.characters as well as the story line
Alright... I see this series is getting a lot new readers.
This was the first time I had published anything I had written. This was my first story, but one I owe a lot to.
I abandoned this project initially because I honestly disliked how predatory the grooming aspect seemed in retrospect. It was supposed to be a few chapters of smut, so didn't matter as much when I began, but this story is what made me realize my passion for good story telling and plot.
For that reason alone, I believe it deserves an end.
I still have it all mapped out, and think the ending will resolve a lot of my issues with it, but I can't make any promises on time. My other main focus is definitely on another story right now, but once I get to where I need to on it, I am gonna swing back with at least a few chapters here to close it up. I doubt this will happen before June/July, and even then, that's likely the earliest you would see an update.
Even so. I apologize to those that were vested, and more so to those waiting over 3/4 years for the end. I hope you'll enjoy the end when the time comes.
Please do continue. I find myself loving these characters and want to see what happens to them