All Comments on 'Mollie from Montana Ch. 02'

You just seem to be able to write these amazing stories!

Boyd

i'm still laughing about evil bennie.i'm not a writer,i'm a reader and boy i love reading your stories.thanks for writing them a fan.i say if you write great stories the people will comment favorable.

since I have been so inspired...

Thank you for shaking me awake with this brilliant creation.

In a mechanical tone...."Gary do this, Gary think this, Gary say that". Mollie is C3PO in a woman's body. And that makes this story a mechanical construct without life or feeling and pretty boring.

Sorry, I find I must retract a portion of my previous lauditory comments.

It is rare that a writer can proofread their own efforts. But, surely if someone with your talent would make an effort to OBJECTIVELY re-read your own writing, you could greatly reduce the grammatical errors.

Please try.

Sincerely,

de Jay