All Comments on 'Molly and Ashleigh'

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BahamaBahamaover 10 years ago
OMG

I usually don't like stories that are borderline incest in a manner of speaking , but this was hot and it made me so wet. I love D/S stories .

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
more more!!!!!

Hot!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Wow!

Please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Good story

Many young women need proper discipline. They often have dad wrap around their little finger. Strict, strong women need to take charge.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Amazing story!

Please, please continue this! Molly's complete aloofness is so hot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
made me horny

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Well Deserved Spanking

Ashleigh is such a naughty slut. She deserves more and harder spankings. Even a few with the belt again. Since she likes her discipline maybe Molly can introduce the paddle and perhaps a few strokes of the cane. More spankings! More step-mother/daughter incest!

buttman52buttman52over 10 years ago
W O W

Fantastic story from a man who has read well over 500 stories,PLEASE don't ever stop writing and I won't stop reading.".....

CassieKCassieKover 10 years ago
Beautiful, so exhilarating.

Loved this one too, but at home, where I could enjoy sitting alone and getting very wet. You have a great talent for writing, your stories are so real and I can see myself in Ashleigh. Please keep writing, I love your work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Nice Story

Liked the slow build-up and the hot sex however, this story should have been extended over many more chapters with Molly really beginning to dominate Ashleigh and turning her into Molly's exclusive lesbian slut and Ashleigh going for it cuz Molly loves her. Something like that but really steamy interaction with Ashleigh's total submission to Molly.

Add more as it's not too late and you're still around to complete.

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenover 7 years ago
Quite hot!

I'm not into B&D, but this story was quite hot. Thank you for sharing it with us!

jenorma2012jenorma2012over 7 years ago
ok

this story is so bad I could not even read all of this, the only thing that is good is that there is only one chapter in this, and I hope there is no more of it

eshortie103eshortie103over 7 years ago
I agree with Hidden

I'm not into b&d either but this was hot. I hope one day you write a part 2!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

That was fucking hot

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