All Comments on 'Mom and Dad's Halloween Party Pt. 02'

Great cliff hanger! Hope part 3 is coming.

Loved part one and two. Hope there will be a part three soon.

Want to find out what happens with mom and Mrs Simpson and of course his lovely sister.

Glad to see part 2. Great series so far, looking forward to part 3.

Really great series, can’t wait to see where it goes from here.

Nice erotic moments. Great sexual tension building between the siblings. And you leave the reader wanting more. This is a fun read. I really am looking forward to this story continuing.

May I assume mom & Alice did not miss their period? I guess this means big bro can't play next Halloween?

Thanks for great stories!

fr_Chaste_2_Chased, Mom isn't drinking, and her boobs have gotten too big for her dress. Definitely knocked up.

Well done! It’s funny and sexy. The siblings each have their own personalities. I’m hoping there are more chapters about their adventures.

definitely needs a part 3

Best

Ending

Ever!

it really needs chapter 3

And it shall have a chapter 3!

(Just not sure how soon; I can't leave the story here, of course)

Very nice. Hot, with a good sense of humor. I’d love to read more.

Really needs chapter 3 now that their Mom recognize her daughter's costume and her son's chest from her bedroom session.

Maybe Mom would welcome her son and daughter in a threesome.

This was a lot of fun, like most of your stories (that I’ve read to now) are.seems like fun-loving personality flows out of every phrase you complete.

Loved the story and the fact of the shoe dropping when the brother found out the ladies were unprotected and the men there were all snipped.

Seeing that the mom finally put 1 + 1 together at the end of this one I am surprised you haven't added a part three yet.

Would sure like to see what happened after she regained consciousness.

More please!

More plz, third act!

Awesomely fun story and well worth five stars. I love this family! I figure that you've moved on to other stories, but I respectfully request that you write at least one more chapter on this storyline. Best wishes and thanks for sharing.

Definitely needs another chapter to wrap things up. Aside from that, pretty good.

Hi,

Not sure you will get this as I see you have not posted in a few years.

I hope all is going well for you.

I have enjoyed your writing and the stories are great, However I wish this one had another chapter or two.

Hoe to see more from you.

Take care,

Rob

I don't know how old this story is, but there HAS to be another part to it!!! Both were great stories.

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