by kathrynmburke
Would be 100X hotter if they weren't both making a mockery of their family and betraying the husband/father. As is, they both are risking blowing up everything they have while cucking someone they supposedly love.
I found this story to be utterly not believable, somewhat repulsive but strangely compelling. I suspect that kathryn, who's a prolific author, just produced this as fast as she was writing it. It's a totally flimsy creation, with no real redeeming features.
IMO, there where missing details/descriptions here and there that would've made the story hotter, but overall, it was a fun read. Thanks Kathryn. Please keep these mom-son stories cumming ;)
Never ceases to amaze me to read comments from “expert literary critics” on an erotic submission website, and chicken-shit critics who don’t reveal a name or avatar, Anonymous. Bet you read every freaking word and probably jerked your poor excuse of a pecker.
Freaking awesome, Ms Burke! I read a piece of work that centered around a mm “tending to her motherly duties” till she found herself enjoying it. (Smirks and smiles). 5*, madam
Every story of yours I’ve read includes “delta” as a euphemism. Perhaps a thesaurus would be helpful.