All Comments on 'Mom and I as Lightning Crashes'

by Tom Mandy

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chytownchytownover 5 years ago
Thanks***

For the read.

DunkirkDunkirkover 5 years ago
Family

Glad the had a large family

kennyboy82kennyboy82over 5 years ago

The basic idea was good, but the writing was very weak and amateurish.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Right Up Until...

The last line. That kind of ruined it for me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
BS

stopped reading at 36DD, size 4, and 34 years old.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Come on man

You guys have to stop with the 36dd crap or 12 to 15 ropes etc... awful

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Great story

One of the best mother/son stories I've read. Plus, movies like "The Ringer" always need extras. One of those kids might be a movie star.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Ones a bit... off

cus your daughter/sister wants you to make her like you made mommy.. she wants daddys d. Lol

KinkycplWiKinkycplWiover 4 years ago
Beautiful

Beautiful story, I have had a couple of fantasies like this. Bad mom yeah I know, incest is so wrong but so exotic. Please write some more me and my family love your story.

Thank you

Annie

joosforchambersjoosforchambersover 3 years ago
I cringed at the end

This history sounded more like a script for a porn video

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