All Comments on 'Mom and Son Cuckold Dad'

This was good. More sex positions would have made it better. S

Decent premise but PLEASE get an editor. The word is muscular. I stopped reading which is sad because the story line is good.

please another chapter to where the son impregnates her

I liked the story but the grammar ans spelling really needs some help.

Could have been more in depth with the details.

It seems to me that English is not your first language

Is English your first language? That was the stupidest writing I've seen in a while! Get several editors if they can stop laughing long enough to rewrite your stories.

Appalling grammar and even worse spelling. It was dreadful. If you really want to keep your fanbase/readership then you must get someone to help you sharpen up your act, an editor or a proofreader or similar

Stopped reading after too many spelling errors. Oh my goodness!!!!!

Good story! But it turns me off when you got to that 10-11 inch bull shit! Less than 2'% of men have a cock that large if that!

I don't know why everyone is giving you so much grief about the story line, none of these erotica stories are real life.

Fix your grammar, and maybe improve on how to make it seem a little bit more real next time. Like maybe dad is a wannabe swinger and has always wanted to see his wife get fucked hard by a young hard cock. They're drunk talking about it when the son comes home in his bathing suit and the mom sees the huge bulge...

Its so good mother and son. Every mother must be his sons first wore.

Some spelling errors, but the story moved quickly. Liked the idea, keep it up

I'm going to assume you will find, or already have found, an editor. I'll not post a low rating, but I will check back. Cheers.

Thanks for the feedback, im not worried about the grammar it's how I talk. I do this to pass time, when I get bored.

turned me on!

Cool cool

I loved it it reminded me of my family.

Thank you 😊

A scene from the movie Varsity Blues at the strip club, "She's a 10!!! A F'n 10!!! What an exciting story. I loved every part of TIT. There are a couple spelling mistakes but I'm far from perfect. Too bad there isn't any real pictures to go w/ the story. Can't wait to read more.

Your story theme has so many potential chapters left to create. Hoping you have more. I enjoy the mom/son/father 3 way cuckold.

Could named the damn dildo something different Could left the world mommy out and your title is misleading it isn't cuckold when the farther gave the permission

When the dad told his son to fuck his mom.

I'm checking back, as promised. No changes on your part. Your comment 'this is the way I talk' is a sign you don't understand how this is supposed to work. You have a number of helpful comments, mostly suggesting you ask for editing help from the many members and authors who will enjoy improving your 'product' at no charge to you. You'll get better scores, attract more readers, be inspired to write more and better material. It's a positive feedback loop. Good luck.

My BF liked to watch porn in the living room my son comes home and starts watching with us next thing I know my tits are out and a dildo is in my pussy the hottest moment of my life

(11/13/2022) An enjoyable read.

Would love a sequel. To see the family dynamic change that happens.

Maybe the father has notice his wife has been sneaking out during the night to fuck their son, hearing his wife's lovely yelps echo the hall. Everytime she leaves, it takes her longer to come back. Knowing this, the father decides to swap bedroom with the son.

Maybe date night now involves the whole family. Father being appeased seeing his wife and son flirting and touching. Date nights can end with wife and son renting a hotel nearby to fuck. Or car ride home can become father becoming chauffeur as wife and son fuck in the backseat.

Father loves being a part of their incestuous affair and love seeing his wife and son happy.

That don't fit into cuckold as the dad knows and approves of it which is something no husband would do hell that is something no man would approve of a cuckold is forcing someone watch you have sex with someone without there approval this did not meet that meaning learn what you writing about before you try to write about it

I fuck my mom while my clueless dad is mowing the lawn just a few feet away. We actually watch him out the window as I'm balling her.

I think that the writer makes this story more of a fantasy than reality . Doesn't anyone have a 7",8" or 9" cock? Seriously, how many 11.5" cocks has the writer or anyone else ever seen? Give us a damn break.