All Comments on 'Mom and Son's Bathroom Tryst'

The closing line was hilarious

Happenstance mother/son nudity and dad's sexual inadequacy. On going family nudity and my leaning of dad's impotence and mom being so horny she could climb the walls eventually brought us together after 3 years of teasing.

One of the best here.

Mmmm ... Garlic toast

Well, I liked it.

I do want more. But have the dad aware of things, and encouraging scenarios.

Son asks father for sex advice, then does what's suggested to mum.

Very good 5 stars next story make it longer and take things a tad slower a good story isn't a race its a marathon

I enjoyed it, a few grammatical errors but overall pretty captivating. Hope there is more to come.

Great story!

I noticed a few typos but not so many to be distracting. I find that backstory about what brings the family members to fuck makes incest stories hotter so I was glad to read the epilogue at the end.

5*s

An excellent first story. 😈 looking forward to more.

thought it was good until you started with the ass spanking shit, not into that, sex should be fun not painful. maybe you would like to get punched in the balls and see how well you like it, wouldn't that really turn you on. 1 star

More, get her pregnant and make her call him her baby daddy

Hard to believe this is your first time writing erotica. The story was well written and you could Write another part.

I loved the story and gave it five stars and a favorite point! I hope in the next chapter that you'll bring the dad in on the secret so they don't have to hide their love making any more.

Great read

This was really enjoyable.

A damn good story, with the potential to go a lot further, which I hope you will do. Including dad and maybe a spit roast, and/or DP. Maybe introduce Olivia to the dynamic.

Well written , good background build up , added you to my favorite list , looking forward to next chapter .

5 Stars. I was leaning towards 4.5 but that line at the end clinched it. Nice work for a first story!

I loved the story....well written...hot and erotic.

Please write some more and maybe have Dad

join in with Mom and Son.

Superb writing and an excellent story even with the spanking.

Keep the stories coming. 5*****

Looking forward to the next chapter

"I wanna put fuck you in the ass," I said before she could continue. She thought about it for a moment, then gave me a small nod.

besides small grammatical errors like above pretty good short stroke story. i would love for you to explore cuckolding with future chapters

It reminds me and my mother mmmmm very sexy

More please. A great start to your library on Literotica

Really good read. Be encouraged & do more. I like how the relationship between them started, although a little fast. Pregnancy is always hot but write what you like!

Fantastic story. Some stories have great detail, but the gloss over the sex. Some stories are just sex, without much story. You did a great mixture of both. I hope you continue the series.

Very good

Brilliant story! I loved it from start to end, the sex scenes were hot..

This story can and should have more chapters

Did the shower get fixed? I hate loose ends.

Please continue! and I'm all for the mom calling him daddy that's a new taboo I never new I needed

Can you do a story where the mom and son just go and get groceries in the car and end up fucking in the parking lot or some side alley while they’re out “running errands”??

Wow...... That was amazing

Can’t wait for the next chapter! 🍆😈

A fantastic story. We’ll written and keeps ones interest. Please, I would love to read more. Thank you.

Great job I look forward to part 2

Is there going to be a second chapter?

Another chapter would be great, where the father finds out and joins in then the two of them give the mother everything she needs.

"gave me a"

remove this part of line line 107, near word 205, if you can use notepad. I don't know if you can change it though.

Otherwise, a fast fun story!

I enjoyed spying on mom when I lived at home & she came to help me clean my place up after my divorce. We relieved those good times only this time I did a lot more than spying as she gave me a quite a show up close & in person.

Great one! Would love a sequel

Good story. Keep up the good work. I can't wait to read more of your work.

Hot! Loved It!

[David Bowie Day 2024]

Mucho Caliente!

11/10!!!!!

I loved it I need a whole series