All Comments on 'Mom and the Police Officer Pt. 02'

Nice addition please keep goin

Well done. Hope the next chapter is out soon.

I deeply enjoy this style of story. Please keep up the excellent work. You mentioned George VI as another author in your intro but I didn't find them in an author search. Can you provide a name of a story George VI did in this category? Thanks.

would have been a great story if it didnt have a kid aspect to it

@anon, he's definitely on here just google "george vi literotica". If you like this you'll definitely like Air Travel Torment and Mom Gets Strip Searched.

@petitelilmynx, many people (myself included) don't consider 18-year-olds kids.

So far this a great story. I can't wait to see where it goes next. Hopefully the wait will be short and part 3 will be longer! Keep up the good work!!!

Love it. Literotica needs more depravity. Hope she shows off in public.

like the story line ,the idea of her show off to public was hot ,don't bother to write sex scene ., just keep going as forced exhibitionism ,hope she might be into an audition for porn

A great homage to George vi who has been quiet for a while. A worthy successor and look forward to next chapter.

I would like to see his friend Carl get involved!

more effort to do , we still need to know bill's plan , more substances to catch ,if you follow the old routine you may like the bully story don't have bully stuff .

may i ask what's the favorite high heel look like? you didn't mention in the story

make the cop force her to fuck his friend carl durring a sleep over and let her son catch her but not stopping her then let the mom catch him watching but she keeps fucking carl till they are done and after carls gone let her go up to his room to say sorry

I love the pacing. The cop is constantly pushing her envelope, but nothing too drastic too soon - causing her to shutdown. Keep that up (in fact, I would have saved the lingerie shopping exposure to her son for another shopping trip later - imagine weekly shopping trips in which she must get approval for all purchases from her son). Don't jump to having her do students or her son or gangbangs or anything too soon. Those are concluding acts, not during the "training" process.

Continue making her "show off" - to son, to Carl - maybe even a colleague or two, but nothing too blatant or overt. Submissive teacher in school/classroom stuff is hot, but must be VERY subtle. As you've shown so far, this is a conservative mother and teacher. Wearing a thong at school with a knee length skirt is too scandalous for her. Blatant exposure to her students would be completely unacceptable.

Draw her humiliation out as long as possible with "innocent" acts before you get into the less innocent ones.

I think you should let us know ,how long you can keep this mess up ,because as you went through the plot ,it was short and slow , you said you got chapters 3 ahead but would that take weeks to done and just 2 pages , IF you like to write more than 5 pages i would be happy ,other wise that's pretty not enough , for this twist with voyeurism blackmail i don't get the theme ,what's she going to do ?

part 3

still work on it ？

is your update gonna be after new year, bro

Here's to hoping so!

Apologies all for the long wait. Part 3 has been submitted and should show up here within a few days. Enjoy!

I still dont see any part 3

literotica still lists part 3 as "pending" - I don't know why it's taking so long to show up, but there's nothing I can do to make it go faster. If you want to read it ahead of time, feel free to email/message me.

It takes a certain level of disrespect to have a son betray his mother or father. Just another story where wife gets turned into a slut with her evil son’s assistance. How sick and sad. Of course hubby doesn’t notice anything because if he did he couldn’t be a clueless cuck. Same ole nonsense

Danny violently slapped his mother Debbie across her tits