by johncbb
But I wish Carl was more the recipient of mom's action than Parker.
Please more of this. Making the mom submissive while the son grows his powers over her is hot! Please more exhibition of her and possible turning her into a prostitute. All of this by her son, the reason she becomes a whore is her son and the reason she stays a whore is her son!
What you should do is go the route of her son makes her his submissive whore, and they make a desperate she will continue their affair if he sets up those bad police men who framed his mom and brings them down.. she starts wearing nylons and lingerie for him and they continue their affair.. I don't want her being passed around to Carl..I don't like stories like that where one is black mailing then they begin telling everyone else.. just continue with mom continuing her teaching like they wake up the next morning, mom nice and fucked and then he lays out the rules and agreement... Have birthdays, holidays, dances, hotels, just him and mom fucking like rabbits.. leave his sister out of it.. .
Yes definitely have an agreement between mom and son that he sets up and brings down the cops who blackmailed her with the agreement, their affair continue and she accepts it.. I'd like that twist.. leave his sister and Carl out of it
Great stuff! Allow the story to go the way your mind sees it. You are doing fantastic.
I have to admit that I was hesitant when I first started following this story. I felt that it was influenced too much by other works and it made it seem unoriginal. I'm sorry I've ever doubted you. You have taken their recipe, added your own ingredients, and made your own masterpiece. Everytime I see a new chapter my dick gets hard just thinking about it. Keep up the great work,
I forgot to say this in my last comment, but I'm glad you enjoyed my story :). It means a lot coming from an author whose work I can't get enough off.
Hott story. Enjoyed reading it. Would love it continued. Maybe where son blackmails her into more depraved acts, such as gangbangs, prostitution, etc
I liked the other two stories so I was glad to this that this chapter was posted. I think this is my favorite chapter so far. I'm excited to see what you do with Carl and Madeline, and I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the fantastic work!
Story would be great if there is more cop actions with Mom than son sons part of being a cuckold and fucking his mom after all are done would be better
I love George VI. But this could hang with any of his stuff. You must keep writing. I'm happy to share ideas with you. I sent you my email.
Reads like a train. In a lot of stories one just skips a lot because of boredom. Not this one, I read it all. I would not make it too extreme, leave the cops out. It was a very good start but I would remain on the same level of exposure, blackmail and humiliation. Maybe involve the headmaster or a collegue, take her shopping again, or a restaurant or bar,...but nothing too extreme. For those readers are other stories available.
Parker could film her and then he would no longer need the cops.
Anyway. It is your story, which means do whatever YOU like to do with it. In any case really great story.
I disagree with the comment on 5/5/18. Why humiliate or keep blackmailing mom. Bring the fricking bad cops down let them be someones bitch in prison. If this was your mother would you let bad cops keep doing this? Who was always there when you were sick, who made sure you had food at dinner time. Do you remember the first titty you ever had? After we are born and cleaned up the first thing stuck in our mouth was mom nipple. I'd have a talk with mom chances are she'd still bang Parker if they could bring the cops down.
Police officers blackmailing and dominating a sweet and innocent Mom was hot and well done. Having the son use his Mom and give her to his friend was too much. A good ending would have been to have the cops take her to further extremes, have her confide in her husband and have him stand up for her and orchestrate a set-up of the cops. They should be forced to suck each other off (videoed), then walk through town completely naked at rush hour with "I'm a proud cocksucker" written on their chests and backs in permanent black marker.
Keep the story going man.. u need to have Parker and mom call off school and spend the whole day fucking..
Increase the humiliation by making her walk nude on the streets with holding a board
'I AM A GREAT COCK SUCKER' then let every student and staff take their turn on her and forcing her to take everyday class nudely
Wonderful story of a beautiful woman being manipulated, molested, humiliated, and dominated both publicly and in private by multiple assailants.
Great work. Hope there is more. Stay true to your vision. Thus far it's been fantastic.
Amazing story. Would love to read the next part. An orgy with the teacher mom in school.
I hope your story will continue! It exceeds the limits of taboos. I then want the mother to become a whore and fuck under Parker control, with anyone
Great story. When the son made her sick his friends cock, I was in shock. He should make her do it to his other classmates and collect cash. And make her fuck them too. Please continue the story. It has so much potential
So wish this story would continue where the son would completely dom and humiliate his mom. Make her whore herself out, get gangbanged, fuck students and strangers, etc. Great sory, just need more
We need to make her a slut in need of students, son, friends, neighbours.. We need more story to this <3
Such a great idea for a series. I hope that you get back to writing it one day. I feel like the first three episodes are a good foundation for a long running story. Regardless of whether you continue to write or not, I wish you the best of luck!
excellent, the fact that she did not want this or succumb to her pleasures, showing she was did nt all of a sudden fall in to passion or love, makes this one of the best of this genre...exc ellent