All Comments on 'Mom Fights for Me to Stay Ch. 01'

Yandere Moms are always an interesting choice.

More please. Thanks for your time and imagination.

A great way for Arthur to fulfil his desires without any guilt. Mom has know he finds her attractive and erotically uses it to her advantage.

Masterfully crafted.

Looking forward to the next part!

All make believe, I know, but it is still rape! Not acknowledged the same as rape of a woman but none the less, rape! Too bad, it could have been a good story.

And what makes you think that she is one? Anyone, fascinating idea. I think that the dude in question is a bit oedipal and submissive, so perhaps he can serve Mom and Kat can move in with them so that he could serve them both. Go full Homer Vargas, femdom, impregnation, incest...sounds like this guy's cup of tea. I'm usually more into male dom, but this guy seems very beta rather than alpha, very sub rather than Dom, not even a switch.

i don't care for rape stories of any kind or gender. Too bad.

More please and make It a longer story. And give It a littel more sex

started out promising but you ruined it with the son getting drugged by Mom. Why did he need this if he was already getting aroused by her? And you also need an editor to fix grammar.

You need to give your son a really good reason to stay home. It does help if mom is attractive.

....and I thought my mom was strict !

He can still play ball , however mom wants him to leave her something to replace him with.

Hope you'll continue with more soon. The bondage and gag was HOT! Would love to see Kat join too.

I like the idea of mom doing her best to keep her son from leaving for college. But, as you say, she already knows he fantasizes about her. It would make a better story for her to seduce him like a lover, not to drug him and keep him tied up. He's not leaving once he sees her willingness to have sex with him...

It was an ok story. I thought it was really short and there really was no plot of the story. It’s just she wants him to stay so she fucks him. I agree that it went to far when she drugged him. It wasn’t necessary to the story.. The story was far to short. I know you’re going to add more chapter but you need a backstory. Without it the story is to plain jane

I certainly didn't expect this but surely the mother didn't have to rape her son; maybe a little seduction could have had the same outcome?

if you're going to introduce non-consent into the story, you'll have to put considerable effort into resolving the breach of trust and consent. It could still work, but if you just hand-wave it off in the next chapter then it's just straight up rape.

Was NOT expecting that turn of events. I liked it, it was shocking and a turn on. Ignore the other comments, not everyone loves massive backstories and long chapters. I personally hate it. I love these one chapter burns. Hot.

Ya everyone just love a good rape story. NOT!

Great story. I just hope that Arthur doesn't end up getting too into it. Having him except it too quickly will break the illusion

Great read and great first chapter look forward to more

Yeah RAPE is always the best first choice to trying to get your child, the one you loved and raised alone, to impregnate you as a way to get him to ruin his chances at a successful future. Crazy Bitch needs to be turned in and arrested the he needs to tell her she ruined their relationship and he never wants to see her again.

Need more chapters asap

RAPE is NOT a way to show love.

Love this. I really hope you write a sequel, extending the sex scenes and deepening the conversation.

l think that's illegal...

Did not like this it was rape not incest maybe if you would continue and bring a little love to the story it would be better just a 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

What a determined woman, too bad she felt she had to resort to the drastic actions she used. Took all choice and responsibility away from him kind of like his father did her and she's hoping for a similar result, interesting. Wouldprobably read more just to see how you resolve the trust issues but doesn't seem like that's in the works. Thanks for sharing your vision and talent

No second part? Good. Not interested in rape.